One mourning when I woke up I was surprised that there was a knock outside the front door.What I normally do is go down the stairs have my break feast brush my teeth brush my hair and other GET READY things so I went down the stairs went to the door to open it I told my mum first though but while i opened the door I saw a box it was a parcel! I thought what was inside. After my thinking I put the parcel inside and told my mum she said to open it so I did what she said I opened it and can you believe it it was a robot! I first took it out of the box and places it on the dining table. Then I programmed it and it worked! It was some sort of tidying up robot so I programmed it to tidy up the hole house and it did! I told my mum that our lives had changed but then things got worse dad just came home from work and he brought a robot from his work now we had two! I told dad that he should take that robot away because we already have a robot and he said that his boss said he needs to keep it for the past few years! what a disaster what are we going to do with to robots!
By: Nikira
I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thank you for this amazing piece of writing. You have some excellent spelling skills. I think one robot is all good , but two would be a handful.
ReplyDeleteyeah two robots will be a handful but if one of the robots turn crazy and the other one turns evil it will be a total disaster!
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