I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Nikira this is Sneha. You did a good job of making that story of Mr shark.you are good at making animations.Mabey you should say that don't be mean and always be nice. From Sneha
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Thank you for your story Nikira. What was Mr Sharks is advice ?
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DeleteHi Nikira this is Sneha. You did a good job of making that story of Mr shark.you are good at making animations.Mabey you should say that don't be mean and always be nice.
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Thanks a lot Sneha and I just wanted to make the animation funny tysm (thankyou so much)
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