Nikira's blog

Tuesday, March 2, 2021

My Poem

 I'v been working so hard on this poem I hope you guy's like It I am so proud of myself!



4 comments:

  1. Wow, I can tell a lot of thought has gone into this poem!
    I can really see the personification that you have been learning about.
    The tree is waving (like a person would).
    The flowers are calling your name (like a person would).
    And the rhyming words give the poem rhythm too.
    I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Tino pai.

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  2. Hi Nikira, I agree with Mr Cossey. I can definitely see your developing strength in using personification. Good use of precise verb 'blooming'. A little reminder to use complete sentences: The swings are flowing/The flowers are blooming. Well done!

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