I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This is my nature creation I am very proud if myself if you have tried you will might feel very proud of yourself it is fun and it is nature do you like this? have you done this before? tell me in the comments.
Hi Nikira it is me Sophie I really like the insect you have made with some sticks and some leaves and other stuff that is part of nature. I really think that you did a amazing job. My favorite part of the photo is that you have done a amazing job.
Hi Sophie Thanks for your comment And yes your right it is part of nature, And again thanks for your amazing comment. I am very proud of my work thank you.
hi it is Jaycie I really like this post because I think it's really cool how you made with in feet all by leaves and sticks and rocks. I think it's really cool how you made with in feet all by leaves and sticks and rocks. how did you make it can you teach me?
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Hi Nikira it is me Sophie
ReplyDeleteI really like the insect you have made with some sticks and some leaves and other stuff that is part of nature. I really think that you did a amazing job. My favorite part of the photo is that you have done a amazing job.
Do you like the insect you have made?
Hi Sophie Thanks for your comment And yes your right it is part of nature, And again thanks for your amazing comment. I am very proud of my work thank you.
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ReplyDeletehi it is Jaycie I really like this post because I think it's really cool how you made with in feet all by leaves and sticks and rocks. I think it's really cool how you made with in feet all by leaves and sticks and rocks. how did you make it can you teach me?
Hi Jaycie thanks for your comment I am very proud of myself and yes I can teach you.Did you notice the flowers?
Deletehello it's me Jaycie again so I really think you did a really really good job it must have been hard right good job?
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