Nikira's blog

Thursday, October 29, 2020

My writing hope you like it :)

  One day Taylor Barther The girl who lived with her dad on the farm, Was milking the cows when, A beam of light shined, Taylor followed the light and found her self in a mysterious room. There her dad Thomas Barther was building some sort of a machine “Oh hello there Taylor!” Taylor’s dad said “will you look after my machine for me I’m going to get some coffee and cookies. “Sure dad” Taylor said and then Taylor's dad went out. “Let me just see if this machine is going to work” said Taylor she switched on the switch And then another beam of light shone and when it ended she turned into a honeybee! “This is crazy” said Taylor “but also cool” She went outside and flew over the meadow. She saw lots of animals she enjoyed the view but she wanted to change back. Taylor went back inside the machine was still there, Taylor let out a relief she went to pull the leaver to switch it on but it was too heavy so she went to go get her trained dog she told the dog to pull the leaver and he did it Taylor was switched back! Then her dad came from getting the food he didn’t realise a thing, Taylor let out a little smile. THE END hope you like this story bye! :)


No comments:

Post a Comment

Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about