I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Nikira, I've learned a lot about frogs from these slides. I had no idea what a frogspawn was until now. Well done on using subheadings to organize different topics. This makes the information easy to read. I also like the videos you've added at the end for extra learning. I think readers wouldn't mind a couple of extra photos/ diagrams.
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Hi Nikira, I've learned a lot about frogs from these slides. I had no idea what a frogspawn was until now. Well done on using subheadings to organize different topics. This makes the information easy to read. I also like the videos you've added at the end for extra learning. I think readers wouldn't mind a couple of extra photos/ diagrams.
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