I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Nikira, I can see the care and effort you put into these slides. You've done lots of research into the issue of littering. See if you can rewrite some of the facts in your own words. You've shown a good understanding of facts- which are statements that can be proved. Opinions are thoughts and feelings which can't be proved. Have a look at slide 4 again, the sentences you've put down for opinions are actually facts. See if you can select other ones from the photo on the left:) Beautiful DLO at the end. I love the little arrows that tell the reader what to do with rubbish. Ka pai!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Nikira, I can see the care and effort you put into these slides. You've done lots of research into the issue of littering. See if you can rewrite some of the facts in your own words. You've shown a good understanding of facts- which are statements that can be proved. Opinions are thoughts and feelings which can't be proved. Have a look at slide 4 again, the sentences you've put down for opinions are actually facts. See if you can select other ones from the photo on the left:) Beautiful DLO at the end. I love the little arrows that tell the reader what to do with rubbish. Ka pai!
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