I am a Year 4 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Miss Izelle. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Nikira, what a neat little Google Drawing you've created. You've clearly presented your opinion in different sections, which makes it easy to read. You mentioned that having too much screen time can make you blind, do you think you can quote evidence that supports this? Perhaps from a medical website? This will make your argument more convincing.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Nikira, what a neat little Google Drawing you've created. You've clearly presented your opinion in different sections, which makes it easy to read. You mentioned that having too much screen time can make you blind, do you think you can quote evidence that supports this? Perhaps from a medical website? This will make your argument more convincing.
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